Keyhole Narrative writing plan

Being a good daughter

Being a  good daughter 

What I mean by being a good daughter is always being respectful to your parents also help around the house without getting told. And being a good role model is respect towards your sibling appreciate what you get from any of your family members. And if you don’t have Anything to help your parents do the dishes. 

A good daughter respect their parents and siblings. and you can get things if you just be respectful.  My parents will always respect us if we do the right thing and do the chores.For an example when your mom tells you to say sorry to one of your siblings agree with her and say sorry.

being a good daughter is a good thing because you get things from your parents.For an Explanation  My parents will be kind if I help around the House and show some respect.when you are on your device and your dad or someone ask you to do the dishes do it right a way without getting told twist. 

A good daughter is one thing you need to work on 

So you get things and a daughter supports their parents anytime.

The things that my parents will do if we help around the house is take us out or have some fun at some place. When one of your parents 

asks you a question focus on them so you don’t get confused

And respect your parents. 

What I mean by being a good respectful daughter is always being nice and kind to your parents also help around the house without getting told twist or more And being a good role model is respect towards your sibling parents appreciate what you get from any of your family members. And if you don’t have Anything to do or to play help your parents around the house and do the dishes. 

Choose It Narrative

Begin Writing Here: One day there was a girl named Sabrina. Later on that 

Day there was someone knocking on the door so then Sabrina told her mum that
Someone at the door. mum went to go and open the door and said what can 

I help you with. And they said is there anyone that would like to do a ballerina 

Dance on a stage. Sabrina put a smile on her face and said I would love to do 

The ballerina dance. The next day she went down to the ballerina dance at 8:00

Clock there were people that were introducing their self to Sabrina to be Continued……..

Seven on a bench

 Task Description: my group readed a book coold Sake adventure. we have to read the book to know what we are doing and then we have creative a plot Line and came up with all of these sentence from our mind.

Number 28 creative writing

                                       Number 28

BEGIN WRITING HERE:   

As the day went by the people in their house were saying What is that noise out their?
So then the people looked out their window and saw Number 28 they looked terrified
And so they all got their stuff and went outside ran as fast as they could. So number
28 saw them running he went to go and chase after them. Number 28 was chasing them
and went into the forest. And all the people were getting fire to try and destroy it they tried
their best but Number 28 got even madder he yore Hes powers.

Explanation template

There are many ways to be responsible. help your parents around the house help people
when they look stuck on their work and listen to your teachers while they are talking. 

A responsibility might be a way to respect people or when a teachers talking you need to stay
quiet. so you know what you are supposed to do for your work. A way to be kind is helping your

family around the house and do what you have been told. 

Being responsible is a way to respect others and at lunch time if someone is lonely, you can ask
if he or she would like to play with you and your friends and have a good day. Being responsible
looks like being a good leader's  look like if someone is not doing the right thing you need to tell
them so they know the way. 

Another way of being responsible is by looking after your own belongings without letting your

parents looking after you. If your parents tell you to do the dishes you should do it right a way so
you don’t get told heaps of times. 

-reason one: it will be good when you grow up 

-reason two: they can be kind back to you 

-reason three: so you can learn more when teachers tell you to do stuff -reason four: its caring
and helpful to people. 

The lighthouse use keper stories

The lighthouse keeper’s lunch Once there was a lighthouse keeper 

Called Mr Grinling. At night time, he lived in a small white cottage perched high on the cliffs.

In the day time he rowed to his lighthouse on the rocks to clean and polish the light. Mr Grinling
was a most industrious lighthouse keeper. Come rain… or shine, he tended his light. Sometimes
at night, as Mr Grinling lay sleeping in his warm bed… the ships would toot to tell him that his
light was shining brightly and clearly out to sea. Each morning while Mr Grinling polished the
light Mrs Grinling worked in the kitchen of the little white cottage on the cliffs concocting a
delicious lunch for home. Once she had prepared lunch she packed it into a special basket and
clipped it onto a wire that ran from the little white cottage to the lighthouse on the rocks. But one
Monday terrible happened. Mrs Grinling had prepared a particularly appetising lunch. She had
made… A mixed seafood salad A lighthouse sandwich and more She put the lunch in the basket
as usual and sent it down the wire. But the lunch did not arrive. It was spotted by three
scavenging seagulls who set upon it and devoured it with great gusto. Clear off you varmints’’,
shouted Mr Grinling, but the seagulls took not the slightest notice. That Evening Mr and Mrs
Grinling decided on a plan to baffle the seagulls. ‘‘Tomorrow I shall tie the napkin to the basket,’’
said Mrs Ginling. “Of course, my dear,’’ agreed Mr Grinling ‘‘A sound plan.’’ On tuesday evening
Mr and Mrs Griniling racked their brains for another plan. ‘‘They are a brazen lot, those seagulls
said Mrs Grinling. Brazen indeed said Mr Grinling. Brazen indeed said Mr Grinling. What shall
we do? Our cat does not appear to like seagulls said Mrs Grinling. Brazen indeed’’, said
Mr Grinling. What shall we do?’’ Our cat does not appear to like seagulls,’’ said Mrs Grinling.
No my dear said Mr Grinling. Hamish is an accomplished seagull chaser.’’ Of course!’’ exclaimed
Mrs Grinling Tomorrow Hamish can guard the lunch.’’ A most ingenious plan agreed
Mr Grinling. Hamish did not think that this plan was ingenious at all. He spat and hissed as Mrs
Grinling secured him in the basket. ‘‘There’ there, Hamish,’’ said Mrs Grinling consolingly, ‘‘I’ll
have a tasty piece of herring waiting for you when you arrive home.’’ Sadly, flying did not agree
with Hamish. His fur stood on end when the basket swayed, his whiskers drooped when he
peered down at the wet, blue sea and he felt much too sick even to notice the seagulls, let alone
scare them away from the lunch. Lackaday, lackaday,’’ said Mr Ginling sadly. ‘‘Miaow, miaow,’’
agreed Hamish pitifully. On Wednesday evening Mr and Mrs Grinling racked their brains again
for a new plan. ‘‘What shall we do? Said Mr Grinling . Mrs Grinling looked thoughtful. I have it!’’
she exclaimed. Just the mixture for hungry seagulls.’’ Indeed my dear,’’ said Mr Grinling What
have you in mind?’’ Wait and see,’’ said Mrs Grinling, just wait and see.’’ Mustard sandwiches,’
’ chuckled Mr Grinling. A truly superb plan my dear, truly superb.’’ On thursday morning Mrs
Grinling carefully packed the mustard sandwiches and sent them off down the wire to the
expectant seagulls.

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Octopus and Cephalopods

Room 2 sat as a class and was watching a movie about octopus to get some ides for our work.

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Shania and Efelata My Genome Sequence

My Genome Sequence 

Our bodies are exceptionally clever. Even when we’re asleep, they’re doing all sorts of extraordinary things, like mending themselves. These things don’t happen by magic. 

Deep inside our cells is a chemical called DNA. DNA acts like an instruction manual, controlling how our body works. These instructions are made up of four chemical letters that we call A, G, T and C. These repeat 6 billion times. That’s enough letters to take a whopping 57 years to read out aloud.

The complete set that makes you the unique and brilliant individual you are, is called your ‘Genome Sequence’. Around 99% of our sequences are the same. It’s the 1% that makes us all different, deciding everything from our height to our hair colour.

DNA is a bit like the computer code used to give robots instructions. Sometimes a glitch in the code, like a spelling mistake, will create individual differences. Most of the time this isn’t a problem. Sometimes it can even be an advantage. But if a glitch makes the instructions confusing, the robot might not be able to do things as it should. It’s the same with our DNA. Everyone has glitches, but some of us have glitches that cause health problems, because our body isn’t getting the right instructions. For instance, having a glitch in the DNA for your muscles might make you less strong. The only way to find that glitch, is to look closely at your genome sequence.

Genome sequencing is an exciting new technology. By taking a blood sample, scientists can remove the DNA and read your sequence using a high-powered machine. By taking a blood sample, scientists can remove the DNA and read your sequence using a high-powered machine. The 

scientists will compare your sequence to thousands of other peoples’, to find the glitch. They might even compare it to your close relatives, like your Mum and Dad.

Working out exactly where your genome is different, can help doctors to diagnose the cause of your condition and decide on the best treatment. It’s still a very new technology so the more people have their genome sequences read and compared, the more we can learn about DNA and the more answers we can find in the future.

• It's one percent .
• Our sequences are all the same
• They could repeat 6 billion times.
• Some kids could have the same (DNA) as their relatives.
• Some time it could be an advantage.
• Everyone has a glitch to them.
• Genome sequencing is an exciting technology
• Scientist could remove some people (DNA) because they could have a glitch in them.
• Sometimes it can even be an advantage.
• Condition and decide
• They use chemicals for (DNA).

The fragile web of life

     task description:
today room 2 sat down in a class and watched a video so we know what to do and also to give you
some ideas. 

Persuasion Map

School hours persuasive

Hook:

Do you know what is persuasive means? well I can tell you all about what it means.

Persuasive means: 

Hook: Well Persuasive means convince someone and that we should have more time at school so that we can
finish off our more work. And get better at job when you grow up. School is good for you because you learn more

and You do fun activities and you also get to go on a trip somewhere that is exciting. The reason why teachers come
to school because so that us students can get better at things and to get a good job for your future. 
Reason one: school should start earlier and end later because kids would learn more things at school and that

school should start earlier because if you didn’t Finish your work off you will might get into trouble from

Your teacher.

Reason two:

At school it is good to learn because when some other students are stuck on something you can go and help 

Them at school it is good to learn because when the teacher asks you a question you know what it is  

                           And you can help them with work. And you can help them get it on there blog and so that they know that you are

being kind. 

reason three:

I think that if you go to school more than you can do your reading maths and writing and you never know if you are .

going to go and get a good reading level and get your grades up So that you can get a good job when you grow up

What time you should go to sleep:

I think that you should go to sleep at 8:00 clock so that you can get more sleep for school and I think that school

should Start earlier like at 8:30 because we can finish off more things At school that you haven't done and it will 

be better if school can finish later because your parents might be still at work.

It will also be good for kids because they could learn how to read when they are older and fun fact because they

could Be better at learning their reading maths and handwriting They could have a better education and a better
future For you and your family. 

Conclusion :

I think that school should start earlier and end later.

Vegetable Gardens

Today we had maths and my class was working on this presentation named Vegetable Gardens.

What is science

per. paragraph

My prior knowledge of persuasive writing

This week we talked about the word Persuasive. Room one sat down in the class and watched a movie to get some good ideas and created a Wordle.

Voice Narrative

Blog Analysis Post.

this week we did our blog Analysis post. 

Choose It 2nd Draft

Begin Writing Here:   In the holidays there was a family who went on a trip with
their family, “Let’s go, hurry before we be late for our flight” Sigh  they went on
a plane to an Island for the holidays. The first thing that they did was got some
stuff like clothes socks devices and more stuff. They drove their car to the airport

and then went to the plane to go on a trip to a island near mission bay. there was
a plane coming towards the plane that the family were in. the driver could not move
there was something wrong with the engine everyone was screaming. The person that
was driving the plane could not control the plane so the plane went so fast down on
the beach and they have all died and no one was there to rescue them.

Choose It.

this week we have been doing creative story for this term 

Begin Writing Here:   In the holidays there was a family mum and siblings they went
on a plane to an Island for the holidays. The first thing that they did was got some
stuff like clothes socks devices and more stuff. they got In the car to the airport
and then went to the plane to go on a trip to a island near mission bay. there was
a plane coming towards the plane that the family were in. the driver could not move
there was something wrong with the engine everyone was screaming the driver could
not control the plane so the plane went so fast down on the beach and they have all
died and no own was there to recuse them.

I like your Latitude

On Monday the 29th of April the seconded term back at school we had an assembly to welcome Point  England student and teachers back to school and to see whats going on this term. inside the hall was Mr Somervill he had a controller in his hand there was a giant robot that was bigger the Mr Somerville the school and Mr Burt was trying to see if the robot will move or something like that. and it did move towards Mr Burt he screamed and opened the head the robot. and it was mr jacobsen and he was the one that was inside the robot and he was that one that made it. he esplanade to all of us how he made it he made it in his garage.

Superman's Dilema

Story Starter (from Pobble 365)

Despite being an incredibly brave, strong, life-saving phenomenon, even Superman had problems.  He still loved his job; he still loved saving lives. Today he had already prevented many catastrophes, flying after a jumbo jet full of passengers that had been plummeting towards the earth at tremendous speed.  Just before lunch, Superman had swooped in front of a moving truck to save a lost kitten. However, now...Superman needed help. He picked up his phone and began to dial he called his best friends to come to his hose RING! RING! RING! Hello superman speaking hi this is an a emergency we need your help what can i help you with there is fire at the city and then superman said i’m on my way. Superman's phone was on low it was On 5% so superman went to call his mighty and said change the plain see you at the city. Superman went as fast as he could and saw his team they rushed to the people the were waving at them. some people were inside and some of them were outside scared and taking photos and there went in and saw some teams trying to destroy the city. But the team took them down they tried to escaped from the city but superman and his team got the and ring the police to take them to jail And everyone was happy and cheering and so of them said thank you for your help we could do it without you.

 

Compound sentence

Compound Sentences

Tui poster

Ring! Ring!

My Visual Mihi

Shark Attack Plot Line

Poly fest day

This week on Tuesday we went on a trip to poly fest the first thing in the morning we did was team

five assembly. some of team five kids had to leave their bags at school because their was to each
bags so then they had to share with someone else

Like your friends. Once Mrs Telea had told us the instruction we got on the bus and we been

talking on the bus taking photos and we got to Polyfest and started walking to the
Work is that work their and gave us blue poly fest bans their was lost and lost of things

We did like dancing singing listing to the work it was lost of fun.

Creative Writing

Who:  the Bus driver and the kids and teacher

Where: at the forest

When: in the morning

Keywords to include:

scary pitch black haunted creepy Old

BEGIN WRITING HERE:

Once upon a time at a school there was a trip to the farm a Bus driver came to a school

And pick up the kids and the teachers. on the way there all of the kids were singing in the Bus.

There was a big truck with some wood at the back of the truck the Bus driver was
beeping the horn because. the truck was coming to closet to the bus and so suddenly the truck

came to closest and a big BANG!  From The truck. everyone was Screaming and the bus went
into the forest and was going up and down the hill. in the forest and killed ever own. and got
older and older.