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Showing posts with label 2018 writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2018 writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 29 November 2018

non camper Recount

Last week on Tuesday most people from the year 6 block were gone to Kawau Island because its was our last time to be in the year 6 block.

I didn't go to camp because sometimes I wake up late and the time I come early to school is at 8 am so that's why i didn't go camp.

On Tuesday we went to the beach to get some clay and also some shells to decorate our art. We came back with our shell's and clay then we got a big paper each and then we got Mr Goodwin's coffee that smells nice

Next we all got into teams in my team was Anna, Naomi, Liliana and Jazzelle. Also we put the coffee in one thing from someone's tote tray to put hot water with the coffee and then mix it all together and crunched up the big paper. Then we opened it up and got a paint brush and paint it  ones we have finished painting it we did some drawing like stick man and animals and on Friday it was a great day. 

Tuesday, 30 October 2018

introduction

Introduction: (5 W’s - Who, What, When, Where, Why)


Today Room 6 literacy class had an experiment outside our classroom.  We made a balloon shuttle
with our buddies. To see how fast our balloon worked.


Begin:
First Mrs Sio gave us instructions that wasn’t a bit clear to some of us.  We had to pick our small
groups and head outside to do an experiment.


Middle:
Next we walked outside in the cold with our group, it was freezing!  We took a chair and were given
a small paper envelope. Inside it was a balloon, a straw and string.  We tied the string to the chair.
We then blew up the balloon, we tried to put the string inside the straw.  It was tricky. We then had to
find sellotape to stick our straw to our balloon.


Our balloon had a hole in it, we then got a new balloon and tried it again.  


End: (What happened, what did I think?)
Lastly we had to pack up and head back to class.  Most of the students experiments worked. Some
were epic fails.   I think this experiment could’ve been better if we had bigger balloons.  Or if we can
try it again.

Friday, 26 October 2018

Going on a trip


Recount Plan
  1. Plan a recount about an unusual event you have witnessed.


Title:   Going on a trip
Introduction/Orientation: (Who, When, Where, Why)

Today Room 6 literally class walked around the school to go to the toilet and explore To find something unusual. And it was disgusting want me nevaeh madison and  brooklyn saw In the toilet was some underwears in own of the toilets.
  
Events: (What things happened?)

On a summer day room 6 literally went to go and line up outside in a beautiful line And wait for mrs sio for her instruction.
We were walking through the hallway and we got to the
Toilets me nevaeh madison and brooklyn went inside the toilet and we went in and out two times because
It stinks so bad. and brooklyn saw some undies lying
On the floor.





Friday, 10 August 2018

Marcus and the wind

In the holidays

Last holidays me and my 2 sister went to latiana, 9th Birthday and my sisters who came with me there names are mya, and cheveu,. my older sister stayed home because she wants to stay home and go.  on the wife on the way there we had pie but that was just a snack for now inside. it had heaps and heaps of people at jump. I jumped very very high and did gymnastics me and tear adear was playing tag. and then i got So tired that my face was so red like a pink and red together i Drinked a lot of water to hydrate  i had doritos chips. and cracks and more after a half hour we said
Happy Birthday to latiana,we said thank you and ate cake the cake was SO! GOOD
It was a chocolate cake and strawberry on top and we got a present from latiana, and
Her mum Anne, that day was amazing.

In the holidays

Last holidays me and my 2 sister went to latiana, 9th Birthday and my sisters who came with me there names are mya, and cheveu,. my older sister stayed home because she wants to stay home and go.  on the wife on the way there we had pie but that was just a snack for now inside. it had heaps and heaps of people at jump. I jumped very very high and did gymnastics me and tear adear was playing tag. and then i got So tired that my face was so red like a pink and red together i Drinked a lot of water to hydrate  i had doritos chips. and cracks and more after a half hour we said
Happy Birthday to latiana,we said thank you and ate cake the cake was SO! GOOD
It was a chocolate cake and strawberry on top and we got a present from latiana, and

Her mum Anne, that day was amazing.

Thursday, 2 August 2018

matariki

Last week On friday the 8th of june it was matariki day The whole school was gathered in the hall. It was the
Day i had been waiting for all week. I was in the arts and crafts group. The year 4 5 6 7 and 8 had to draw something for matariki
On a painted rock.and the year 1 2 and 3 did maori patins it was
A mazing i was doing maori fish hook.i
Color red and the background was full of
Heart this day was amazing .  

Thursday, 21 June 2018

temp


Choose some writing you have done in the last few weeks. Paste it below.

once upon a time in a jungle At the waterfall a monkey’ name Tomis’’ He was at the waterfall having a Drink. But  he heard a wed noise coming from up top inside a cave.


Paste it again. We are now going to re-craft it. To improve our writing today we need to have
  • A simple sentence    exam
  • A compound sentence
  • 3 descriptive words
  • Capital letters in the right place
  • Full stops in the right place
Once upon a time  in a jungle At the waterfall a monkey’ name Tomis’’ He was at the waterfall having a Drink. But then he heard a wed noise coming up top inside this giant cave.